And so we raised
a toast to the stars.
For their valiant,
yet foolish attempt
at keeping destiny apart.
In response to Folly.
#short, Daily Prompt, destiny, folly, Poem, prompt, stars, Those Pointless Thoughts, Thoughts, toast, together
December 16, 2016 at 2:24 am
You’re welcome. and I missed the other slip, too. Stars is plural. “Their valiant attempt…” unless you’re referring to the toast’s “valiant, yet foolish attempt”?
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December 16, 2016 at 2:11 am
Ahh thank you for pointing that out, I’ll fix it right away!
December 16, 2016 at 1:57 am
Sorry to rain on your poem, but folly is a noun, not an adjective. The adjective form is foolish.
“for its valiant, yet foolish attempt….”
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