It was when they could take no more,
that they screamed.
Till their voices betrayed.
Till the ground beneath them shook in fear.
“For once” it seemed to say,
“I will play the tune
and boy oh boy,
will you dance.”
In response to Elicit
It was when they could take no more,
that they screamed.
Till their voices betrayed.
Till the ground beneath them shook in fear.
“For once” it seemed to say,
“I will play the tune
and boy oh boy,
will you dance.”
In response to Elicit
January 10, 2017 at 10:27 pm
Thank you I am glad you liked it! Most of my pieces are a result of strong impulsive emotions and my hope is to always get a similar reaction back. But I think assuredly vengeful does some it up quite well 🙂
A thought from,
Those Pointless Thoughts
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January 10, 2017 at 5:52 pm
Something about this piece really struck me. I think it’s because it comes off to me as assuredly vengeful. Not sure if that’s what you were going for at all, but I dig it.
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